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Given 2012-11-15
Boy. is a poem that punches the reader with that first line and leaves them out of breath for the entirety of the experience. The writer, *JakesException is someone not to be glanced over or underestimated. A lot of us could stand to learn a thing or two from his gallery full of work that has a mentality of 'in your face and deal with it' badassery. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )
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Jenny345 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
Nicely done. You did not have to take your own life.
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Outstanding <3 I love it
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limtrevor Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Intersting...
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Nichrysalis Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can't believe I never revealed what I got from the poem. I still reread it from time to time because it's so well-written.

Translation:

(I masturbate)

one night too many
with heavy breathing
typing with two fingers (holds a double meaning in reference to a form of masturbation)
(that experiment more than you would like)

typing for relief
fiddling out a final request (fiddling being a form of playing the violin that is similar to shrieking as well as meaning 'tinkering with')
of me pleading for release (another double meaning here, as pleading to be released from punishment is a common thing to hear when someone is caught doing something)
Thinking and seeing things in black and white (possibly a reference to animalistic urges: it either turns you on or doesn't)
no one would be at fault for making symptom-sheets public
(I think I'm losing my mind for thinking that)

What do you mean "We'll see about taking things further"?
You abstaining from me (this line also refers to a chastity belt)
has caused me to lose my erection (a reference to the slang term, boner; skeleton could be a reference to the phrase 'skeletons in the closet" which itself has a double meaning)
and rethink if you meant what we did last night
Ejaculating (and breaking the silence, an oxymoron)
into bed-sheets (a reference to the earlier mentioned symptom-sheets, suggesting that what the boy feels is a symptom of something and not a pleasure)
(is a waste of my 4 years of sexual experience)

If you won't help get me off,
I'll masturbate by myself
There are (I like this line because it is representative of two kinds of sex: sadomasochism or someone creating a romantic encounter for their lover)
love handles I can get a grasp on (or literally: pour wax onto)
Only a mouse-click away from our chat (internet porn :|)


It's a lot less fun to read that way :XD: , but that's always what I've got from it plus some meanings I gleaned from the poem just now.
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JakesException Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
I'd say you've hit most of what I was going for with that translation. There were a few things missed out, but nothing major. Shame it took you so long to type this all out, right? XD

(P.S. From the way you wrote that, it sounds like you might have some sexual tension. :P)
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Nichrysalis Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
>_>
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